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Sunday, March 17, 2013

The Adventures of Lola: Temptations by RedGoddess

Happy St. Patrick's Day! Many celebrate this holidays with festivities and parades. Lola's hotel is no exception and have their of party guests gone wild. Hope you enjoy the latest story. Let me know what you think in the comment section:)

Hotels are the perfect refuge for people who can't say no to temptation. Every corner you turn, there is a substance we all should avoid. There are left over glazed donuts and stale chips in the cafeteria. Cake in the dining room for a staffer's birthday who's not even working today. Lola's Manager even has liquor hidden in plain sight, on her expensive desk. Standing in the lobby, wearing a green scarf, wishing guests "Happy St.Patty's Day," is her best escape from the temptations. 'Let's pretend all is jolly while she rewinds her worries in silence.' Some guests don't need an occasion to misbehave. The bar is packed with countless lost souls for Happy Hour daily.  This weekend is exaggerated. She will leave on the dot tonight. She has zero tolerance for privileged drunks.


  1. I like the way the character's personality is shown through her actions and expressive wording. I also enjoy the text contibutes to an "immersive" reading; we feel we are right there, witnessing the scene. Well done!

    1. Thank you Lizzie:) I appreciate your feedback. I hope Lola continue to draw you in.

  2. Brilliant line: 'Let's pretend all is jolly while she rewinds her worries in silence.'

  3. Thanks, Alex! There is a lot pretense in her line of work.